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The Time Grows Ever Shorter
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The Time Grows Ever Shorter |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
The time falls ...nearer...nearer All the dreams glow clearer...so much clearer The Thunder balls in lightning reins about around my fists I wield with growing ardor Felling peaks in sunrise scenes ...just to see ......a further horizon who amongst you would deny my love but thee object of all attentions affection Who would dare but thee to disjoin the sincerest ascencion you mortals never having quaffed a single breath Elysian sweet so mere we believe there is a chart the river Styx Wherefore the reason uncharted a purgatory nation Yea unto us casting a die in a dying cast reach for and forward for the past knowledge thrown aside for gunpowders glory Hell the partishonless aspect of the unpunctuated treatise is hard enough to say Why bother please retire the elder shaman say we have met the people and they are us without bowls or robes primitive savages they rend the earth for stores of simple fodder mass murderers surviving All "Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion. [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wouldn't think anyone would deny you.... this is a deep poem..and I am very bad at evaluating them when they are entrenched in meaning..huggz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Well now it is apparent what my mind ponders at 2:00 a.m. Wrote this half asleep and did not realize i wandered from personal emotions to the POV of beggar monks regarding the farming of the land as pillage. I appreciate your reading I doubt many will bother woth this veritable barrage of words. Ah well I am often described as incomprehensible. AT "Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This had the feel of a person entering the embrace of Morpheus and once in deep sleep, sang an Opera of dynamic proportions... incomprehensible? No. Profound? Yes.... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Hey, I'm getting better...I understood at least half of this one. Ha! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Interesting and thought stimulating...well written. Poeminister |
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