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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-22 04:54 PM

The Winter Holds

Whitened heavens seemed to fall
icing paths of future thought
edges sliding, leaving prints
to coat with crystals, glitter wrought.

Walked the whitened, felt the freeze
refreshments taken in my view
swept away, when comes the breeze
wonderflakes, this morning new.

My eyes beheld a scene of bright
amongst my grayness, palmed in hands
when reaching out, to capture white
to melt the coldness as it lands

Upon my cheeks, now rosey red
stirring memories, of moonlit stride
pacing steps, in each a thought
of strolling with my love beside.

Spring not far away and yet
the winter holds, I love it so.
It fires warmth within my soul
until the turn of seasons show.

~Wynter
this picture won't show on here and I don't know why...so this is meant for my poem...
http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/swalk3.jpg

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-22-2001).]

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2001-02-22 05:21 PM

Beautiful........You have such a talent for beautiful imagery and emotion. I just love it! Always enjoy reading your work.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-02-22 08:23 PM

Wynter - again, and what can I say, you write gorgeously. And, as far as winter goes, I believe it would be better in PA, than in AL. Ha....

BC

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-02-22 10:03 PM

A very colorful rendition...well done!...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-02-25 07:35 AM

dreamkeeper
&
BC
&
Lady in White
thankyou for the read, my fellow poets...sorry for the delay in responding *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-02-25 10:06 PM

Naked--
Beautiful imagery and rhyme...enjoyed this very much.

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-02-27 06:02 PM

Poeminister
thank you

for always supporting my words

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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