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The Ocean
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The Ocean |
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*STINA* New Member
since 2001-02-24
Posts 5Michigan |
The Ocean The waves are beating against the shore Showing no mercy they come back for more One after one they tear things apart Like the battles bestowed upon my heart The wind is blowing the sand in the air In all directions it has not a care Peaceful and pure it blows through the night Wish I felt the wind blowing in my life The moon shines down from the starry sky And reveals the mysteries the ocean hides Things that no person will ever see Like the secrets I keep hidden in me |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
A very beautiful write!  WELCOMETO PASSIONS |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome to the family. Your poem is about the ocean and moon, now I know you belong with us. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is a lyrical poem! I enjoyed it very much. Please check your email!  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Welcome to the joint, *STINA*. Enjoyed your first post. I like your style. We'll be waiting anxiously to hear more about those secrets! Krawdad |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write...Welcome to Passions!! |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A nice first post, and I look forward to reading more! Cheers  Jon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to Passions Stina, this is a lovely offering... sincere and well written, wonderful imagery and melodic cadence great writing... so nice to have you here. take care jm Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, this really is beautiful, and I would also like to join the family above me by welcoming you to Passions!! You'll love it here, and we already love your work!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions enjoy your read |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and what a beautiful entrance you made with this excellent penned piece. looking out for more. Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Like this ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome! I love poems about the ocean. Well expressed! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a lovely debut! Welcome. Loved the gentle mystery in this. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent poem, a grand entrance for sure. However, you might wish to feel a gentle breeze before a big wind. Wouldn't want you knocked off your feet just as you begin. Welcome!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a lovely entrance you have made here. Very nice writing that conveys your emotions well. Welcome to Passions!! I hope to see more of you here. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey! Welcome! A most beautiful poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - what a grand entrance you made with this poem! I relate very deeply to your words, this was so well expressed, I look forward to more poems by you ~Welcome to Passions~ |
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