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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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tell me now about the moats and bridges drawn in chains of spoke tell me? about keys occur-- the ways of fit within a spur? about the taste of finger's lick? exquisite timing? sweet drawbridge? drifting fingers, trail of ghost, the finger's love I want the most whispered secrets, draw me in. Again. Again. And then? ...again. I do not have the brushes fine- in taste of you and sweet sublime. I've no access to northern sky... regretfully, you'll not be mine. But may I have a long days' night? to capture you charcoaled in light? and all the darkness but a whim to knead eraser once again? I know that I must frighten you. All that I feel, must scare you too within me? is no line to cross? a scarf of sadness...Boa's Moss. that all my love lost, once was mine, etched in edges, lingered rhyme. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do not have the brushes fine- in taste of you and sweet sublime. I've no access to northern sky... regretfully, you'll not be mine. But may I have a long days' night? to capture you charcoaled in light? and all the darkness but a whim to knead eraser once again? I know that I must frighten you. All that I feel, must scare you too within me? is no line to cross? a scarf of sadness...Boa's Moss. that all my love lost, once was mine, etched in edges, lingered rhyme. ================= *shaking my head* .... damn ... just damn!!!! going to bed with poetic envy tonite for sure gotta bad case of rhyme jealousy cant think of anyone better to catch it from  Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o wow great read kept me going sen you are so good at what you do |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ And long may it linger ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge? If I could have it surgically removed tonite? I WOULD. it hurts. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Pure exquisite writing, serene one.... |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Serenity I can't help but to echo Balladeer's comments. This was just exquisite.  Garfield |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl girl girl...saying I love this doesnt even come close to telling you how it touches me... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent write serenity...as always your flow and rhyme blows me away. Well done. Poeminister |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
serenity~ wow! this was just awesome....very cool as Jan would say lol wonderful write...full of excellent and amazing rhyming schemes...i stand in awe. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very nicely done serenity ... leaves me with a feeling of deep longing |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this one is so intense. You always outdo yourself. Glad I found this. Awesome.. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM.....you flatter me, keep it coming, please! wow...yer so sweet yuh! with hugs. Marge...just a sad moment, my apologies for the blue reply. Thank you michael....grinning here...remember the "sweet serenity" oh well...maybe I'll just try for serene.  gg...thank you, I love echoes. Paula? How are you my friend? been crazy around here...thank you, sorry I've been "away" we will catch up soon, k? amy? Thank you much, you are truly a sweetheart! Rex...simply HUGS...I know you've been through some difficult times of late--I pray that you are well. Poe...your kindness and graciousness always touches my heart, thank you. sandra? I thank you so much...to me? it is ALL about personal best. so I appreciate your comment very very much. and sorry so late with my replies...but boy, DO I HAVE BEADS? I have BEADS.... Thanks and love with my customary HUGS TO FORUM " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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