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Dawn's Kiss
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Dawn's Kiss |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Dawn's Kiss touches gently my skin teasing me towards a slow consciousness A warm brush of tenderness Soft ambers upon silken skin I lay quietly Slowly fading from dream to today in the golden silence of morning "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A beautiful and peaceful write....a wonderful introduction to morning...teriffic write! Nathan |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Stretch*~ ~*Yawn*~ Good morning dreamkeeper! Very cool piece.....Much enjoyed!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, dreamkeeper, that would have been a wonderful way to be awakened. I awoke to the darkness of morning. Started working on my checking account after the morning comics and crossword puzzle. That's what tied my neck in knots. I've had my walk, it did wonders. But, oops, I just got the mail and it has me thinking again. Oh, my, but really, it was mostly good mail, so there's no need for knots. Think I should get my head examined? Or just hire a masseuse? Oh, now for the real reason I am replying, I love your poem; it's delightfully woven to express a gentle wakening. Lovely! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if I could wake up like this every monrning. . . I'd be happy. . . wonderful poem Dreamkeeper. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is a poem to treasure..very lovely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thank you Nate! Good morning, Irie! Dear VAS.......I had my own checkbook mess the other day and I know EXACTLY what you mean! Thank you Sven.......yes, mornings like this one are treasured! Thank you Wynter! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
No, I need coffee to get me up  Nah this is a lovely way to wake up ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Okay now I also need coffee to KEEP me up! But this is enough to GET me up. Thanks Moon Dust! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dreamkeeper - I've enjoyed your writings, and hope to read more. This one is just lovely, really enjoyed it. BC |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
a beautiful reflection on the morning... ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this feeling muchly...beautifully written. Poeminister |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a lovely way to be greeted by morning light! Wonderfully expressed! Take care, Melissa~ |
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