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Passions.......Tanka
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Passions.......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Passions passions of fire embraced by heavenly arms cascades path of light confluent with ocean's blue God's wondrous love shining through Charisma ~TMP~ 22/02/01 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful Charisma..you have captured the intense beauty of that picture in your words in the Tanka format that you master so well. awesome picture!! so nice to see your name back here again  Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Heavenly, as the photo is heavenly. Really enjoyed the read. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So beautiful are your Tankas even without the pictures but you light them up with the extra touch. Lovely my friend.......just lovely. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, these flow from you beautifully.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is so beautiful! SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma, please don't ever stop writing these tankas it's a blessed gift you have and I'm delighted to read them all... This is gorgeous sweetie and the image you've placed with the poem is perfect... Hugs2Ualways PoetFriend ~coco~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You pen these exquisetly...beautiful Tanka. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ My sweet friend - this is exquisitely lovely. The picture pales in comparison to your thoughts. But it is lovely in it's own right. You are just so very good at this style. It becomes you so. So good to see your sweet self here ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Janet Marie: Thank you for your kind words, and I missed it here too, hope to be often here over one week, as I am very busy with moving my homepage, glad that most is done. VAS: thank you for the heavenly my friend, glad that you enjoyed it. Mark: thank you my friend, for your always kind reply, it's the photo that inspire me to write......wasn't plan to post anything before I was done with my homepage, but well when I met these awesome picture, I couldn't resist the passions within and this tanka was born. Sunshine: thank you for your always kind words, I am really glad that you enjoyed it. Sea: thank you for the beautiful my friend. CocoBaci: my dear Poetfriend, I don't stop with writing....and even if I desired to stop I think that it would be a hard way as I was grab by the beauty of this photo while it was speaking to me. Only very busy with moving my homepage, have to do that before march, and glad that most is done....at the same time I want to update the site too, love to put these tanka's on my homepage too..thank you for your always warm support my friend. ((hugs)) Poeminister: thank you for the excuisetly my friend, I appreciate your words always highly. Marge:thank you for your always heartwarming comment, and I am glad to be here too, missed it very much here and hope over one week to read more and reply more, but I promised myself to finish my homepage first. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
LOve the reverance for the gift of life in this one Charisma! Good writing! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Beautifull. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
A touch of elegant simplicity just as it should be. Well said AT |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, whenever I see a post with your name attached I know I will read something superb with the graphics to match. And your Tanks outshine them all. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so elegant are your words... ~Softsmiles, Charisma (your name fits you well) ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem, I especially loved the last two lines....brilliant work! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, Wow!! This was fabulous. The words and the picture go hand in hand. Excellent writing my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh my, I haven't espect so many replies.... Thank you all for your wonderful words, and please forgive me that I don't thank you by name....as my time is limited now, as I love to read some more beautiful poems from you. but do know that I really appreciate your kindness and wonderful comments. thank you all. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey this is pretty good |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
It's great.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - an amazing tanka!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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