Open Poetry #12 |
Inversion (Acrostic 27) |
ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Insights Introspection Needful knowing holds keys opens Visions doorwways lead on to an Encounter with self in time a Real oposittion or simply dichotomy mind seeks Self no matter anniversary or adversarial dreams Inviting once again inversion can you know asking Of the who that seem to assign destinies that means Now and forever you are in contest judged by whom "Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
A serious look inside oneself. Judged by whom? Our selves maybe? May be that I have misinterpreted this piece....... this is just what I've picked up from it. At any rate, I enjoyed your work. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Okay, I almost had it......and then at the end it slipped right out of my hands! I shall contemplate....... "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
i am somehow reminded of "eyes being burned out in the well of Truth" decisions are dominos, indeed... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ATelemon, a thought provoking write. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
ATelamon, Interesting piece...enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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