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JLR
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0 posted 2001-02-23 10:23 PM



Romance Revisited

I hadn’t even thought of love as anything but a dream
That others have and some find true
Until one day I heard from you
Out of nowhere, out of a distant memory
You said that you had thought of me
Often
In the passing years.
I didn’t pay much mind at first…busy with my life
We spoke, we talked a time or two
And slowly I saw the truth
Out of nowhere, out of a distant memory
Yours was the soul meant for me
To know
For all the coming years.
I know now that I live in your love, as you live on in mine
Though we hold each other in silence
We have known the hearts pure kindness
Out of nowhere, out of a distant memory
You are the one who rests with me
Here
In the unnumbered years.


(Thank you SEA-----for giving me the idea, motivation and strength…to remember. It was worth the pain, but then love always is.)


[This message has been edited by JLR (edited 02-23-2001).]

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-02-23 10:29 PM


Yes, love always is.......even when it makes you ache inside.......

This is so wonderful I told you you could do this........ Now I hope to see more SEA

JLR
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2 posted 2001-02-23 10:37 PM


That was quick----don't push it! Ha! Still...Thank you. I mean that.
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-02-23 10:40 PM


No, thank you..........very much.... SEA
Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2001-02-24 12:45 PM


This is wonderful...and you are right...love is worth the chance...even with the pain...cuz someday its gonna be the right love and all the scars will fade beneath the light of that love...
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-02-24 08:53 AM


out of a distant memory..I love that line *s..nicely done J

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



walker
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since 2001-02-11
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6 posted 2001-02-24 11:02 AM


To face your pain is part of the healing process, and it takes courage. Lovely poem!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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7 posted 2001-02-24 11:06 AM


VEry lovely! It's like a fantastic movie theme with love being lovlier the second time around. I would so like to find this, but I just don't go looking. Heh-heh, I guess I want it to find me sitting here.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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8 posted 2001-02-24 11:51 AM


Yes, real true love is worth all of the pain, all of it. Love is worth any price but it is so priceless!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Celeste
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Posts 597

9 posted 2001-02-24 03:49 PM


Oh beautiful.......left me with many reflections as I contemplate love.
The ending of this, I do think, is what I loved most of all. Love is a gift.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-02-24 04:32 PM


I enjoyed reading your poem...James
OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
11 posted 2001-02-24 06:06 PM


Loved this one, another for the library me thinks, hmmm, I'm becoming quite a fan. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

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