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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Enough |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Enough Sometimes when you give Whatever you give It’s not going to be It will never be Enough Everything wouldn’t Couldn’t be Enough Sometimes when you say Whatever you say It’s not going to be It will never be Enough Everything isn’t still Nothing is ever Enough Sometimes when you try Whatever you sigh It’s not going to be It will never be Enough Everything is not Cannot be Enough Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is true, especially for some people. Whatever you do or say, they think could have been done better or said better. Sorry to hear that you are feeling this was Marsha. Take care. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
True words Marsha ... never can it be enough ... no matter what the topic or situation. I really liked the repetitive aspects and subtle variation in the phrasing ... it flowed really well, nicely done!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
How true you words are Marsha.....wonderful write! Nathan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha~ excellent write. i know you wrote this for me cuz you told me lol and i thank you so much! your words touch me deeply and couldn't be more true. you are so kind..thanks for everything. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Indeed, there's enough for some of us..but not for most of us it seems most of the time...wonderful write. Poeminister |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Yes,Marsha,sometimes enough is enough this is going to be one of my fovrite poem of yours enjoy reading it a lot |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Elizabeth love this came from something I was talking about. I wrote it for Amy, but sometimes we've all felt like this. Thank you Take care love as always Mushy  Kit love thank you, it's true we've all been there with this one I think. You can almost hear yourself saying I've given you everything I have no more. Thank you love Take care love as always Mushy Nathan thank you so much, as I've said we've all been in this place at least once. Take care love as always Mushy Amy dear heart, you know love you really do. And as far as you're concerned you deserve so much more. Love ya little sis Take care love as always, Mushy Sister phoenixes rule! Poeminister love thank you so muchly, I really appreciate you, I truly do Take care love as always Mushy Vandana love thank you, I'm really touched by that. Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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