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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-24 11:56 AM



Enough

Sometimes when you give
Whatever you give
It’s not going to be
It will never be
Enough
Everything wouldn’t
Couldn’t be
Enough

Sometimes when you say
Whatever you say
It’s not going to be
It will never be
Enough
Everything isn’t still
Nothing is ever
Enough

Sometimes when you try
Whatever you sigh
It’s not going to be
It will never be
Enough
Everything is not
Cannot be
Enough

Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-02-24 12:00 PM


This is true, especially for some people. Whatever you do or say, they think could have been done better or said better. Sorry to hear that you are feeling this was Marsha. Take care.
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-02-24 12:15 PM


True words Marsha ... never can it be enough ... no matter what the topic or situation. I really liked the repetitive aspects and subtle variation in the phrasing ... it flowed really well, nicely done!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-02-24 12:59 PM


How true you words are Marsha.....wonderful write!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-02-24 01:04 PM


marsha~
excellent write. i know you wrote
this for me cuz you told me lol and
i thank you so much! your words touch
me deeply and couldn't be more true.
you are so kind..thanks for everything.
take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-02-24 01:06 PM


Indeed, there's enough for some of us..but not for most of us it seems most of the time...wonderful write.

Poeminister

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6 posted 2001-02-25 10:45 AM


Yes,Marsha,sometimes enough is enough this is going to be one of my fovrite poem of yours enjoy reading it a lot
Marsha
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7 posted 2001-02-26 06:34 AM


Elizabeth love this came from something I was talking about. I wrote it for Amy, but sometimes we've all felt like this.
Thank you
Take care love as always
Mushy

Kit love thank you, it's true we've all been there with this one I think. You can almost hear yourself saying I've given you everything I have no more. Thank you love
Take care love as always
Mushy


Nathan thank you so much, as I've said we've all been in this place at least once.
Take care love as always
Mushy

Amy dear heart, you know love you really do. And as far as you're concerned you deserve so much more. Love ya little sis
Take care love as always,
Mushy

Sister phoenixes rule!

Poeminister love thank you so muchly, I really appreciate you, I truly do
Take care love as always
Mushy

Vandana love thank you, I'm really touched by that.
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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