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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I do not want to write my life over--make it new again. I simply want to claim the might of authorship and write my end. Every trial, every tear, can make each blessing much more clear-- every blister on my foot is callous of each step I took and I am proud to call it mine won't even leave a shadowed mime-- everything I did is song-- even the dirges sang at dawn. Every tear that drops on keys renews my faith of hope in me coldness cannot be a cloak and loving hands would never choke-- A planting happened deep inside- A seedling watered by love's cry. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"coldness cannot be a cloak and loving hands would never choke-" "A planting happened deep inside- A seedling watered by love's cry." Life's love and pain can certainly teach us so much. It can turn experience into a reflecting feeling of happiness as the years pass. Celeste there certainly is no shadowed mime in your case...great write my dear Acadian girl! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Well said-direction is the thing. Get knocked down, when you stagger up you will still know just what you seek. Personally I think I am responsible for "authoring" all my life, good and bad. Well said AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Every tear that drops on keys renews my faith of hope in me coldness cannot be a cloak and loving hands would never choke-- A planting happened deep inside- A seedling watered by love's cry. hmm...each of these lines says so much too me, serenity..here's to the seedling's flowering... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written and expressed. enjoyed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do not want to write my life over--make it new again. I simply want to claim the might of authorship and write my end. Every trial, every tear, can make each blessing much more clear-- ===================== Every tear that drops on keys renews my faith of hope in me coldness cannot be a cloak and loving hands would never choke-- A planting happened deep inside- A seedling watered by love's cry. ======================= "I simply want to claim the might of authorship and write my end." you are wiser than you know my twin... and you write my heart in this piece of poetic perfection this is absolutely beautiful Sen... "Every tear that drops on keys renews my faith of hope in me" sincere and true rhyme of you me sweet  Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yep yep yep...write your own song even if the words dont rhyme...as long as you hold the pen...GREAT write girlie |
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