Pisces - Fishes. Double Acrostic

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-02-24 10:43 PM

Prone to keep things soft, can adapt and switch on, off
Intuitive but shy seldom centered on the I
Sensitive with secrets, this fish avoids all nets
Considering others wish makes vulnerable this fish
Ever idealistically high , can look you in the eye
Sound of water in eye of wishes, Neptune rules these loving fishes

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-02-24 10:48 PM

Very creative, well penned! My Mom is a Pisces, and I will share your double acrostic with her and I agree with everything that you have said~

Take care,
Melissa~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-25 02:15 PM

wow. . . excellent Kethry. . . you've really been doing well with these!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-02-25 02:21 PM

Wonderful double acrostic.. nicely crafted.

Poeminister

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2001-02-25 05:06 PM

Kethry dear heart, just when I think I might have done one right you come along and cap me. How am I ever going to catch up with you if you keep flying over my head you, you, Missy. Now stop writing this beauty and get back to work, did I say you could take time off Mmmm? No certainly not dear heart, I didn't did I?

Love this dear heart, you are altogether far too good at this. Fabulous work,

Take care love as always
love and warm stuff
Slushy

(And why hasn't it got my name on it? You know I would have written it, or I would've if I could

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-02-26 12:12 PM

Very very creative and a wonderful write too Keth! I really love the way you did this one.........nothing fishy about it at all....he he....love to ya!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-02-26 11:39 PM

bump

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2001-02-26 11:57 PM

I suppose it is your sign as well - well done - well done

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-02-27 04:09 AM

Wilfred,
My sign is Saggitarius but it got me started and I've done every one since.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2001-02-27 05:35 AM

very clever and masterfully accomplished...good work!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-02-27 06:01 AM

Very creative Kethry! You've captured the characteristics very nicely here in this piece ... what a unique and wonderful double acrostic! (ps ... love it extra special 'cause I'm a Pisces - to the library you go ...)

Best wishes,
/Kit

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