Open Poetry #12 |
Song of Chance |
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Song of Chance In my bosom plays your tune my love let us take flight under the soft light of the moon up forth to heaven's height let's dance dance and prance and make our pleasure loud sing the song of chance; let's waltz upon a cloud And sway away this night under the halo of romance where a thousand dreams bright shall be the beauty of our trance Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"let's dance dance and prance and make our pleasure loud" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh.....I like this very much...........nice......... SEA |
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ALIKUTWO New Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 3 |
I thought you were very brave to write an uner the light of the moon poem. I liked the dance and prance and trance connection and wish the trance connection was closer. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yes yes lets waltz woohoo good one |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, you have swept me to the clouds where we dance the night away! Wonderful piece, fantastically fun! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Yes!---Seems the night for it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And sway away this night under the halo of romance where a thousand dreams bright shall be the beauty of our trance ============ oh yes... I so enjoyed this tune of the moon. very cool imagery here PM and perfect cadence kissed romantic notions very lovely sentiments well done poet sir Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
K, uplifting, ethereal, lovely. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect; happy, lyrical, and just wonderful! Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poeminister, Beautifully romantic thoughts. I loved reading this. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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