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Things she'll never tell you (my sappy poem for the year)
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Things she'll never tell you (my sappy poem for the year) |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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I'm sending this to you in secret to tell you of the woman who loves you. I feel that you should know a few things... that she would never tell you herself. To begin with, She loves yellow roses. But she hates roses without a reason. Second, She really does think of you all day and sometimes in her sleep. Holding her hand will do very nicely but holding her heart will do better. She wants to be pretty and doesn't know how so she pretends to be gorgeous instead. When she changes the subject it isn't for spite it's because the thought of you is distracting. She buys Valentines Cards before Febuary and can't barely wait to send it. She wants to touch you and wants to be touched... she feels so safe when you hold her. She makes you think and wonder and puzzle but loves it when you do the same. I'm sending this to you so you know how to love her and remember, it will be returned. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sappy or not, I like it.  Wish I'd known how to say this to a couple of people in my life. Well done!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Saxoness, I loved this!  Write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
hmmmm well I know a few other things she doesn't really say, but these were ones that took my breath away. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'When she changes the subject it isn't for spite it's because the thought of you is distracting. ' Oh, but sappy is the best kind! This is wonderful, Saxoness! Love it! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Thanks all! What can I say...I'm sticky with sap lol. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Not so sappy Nice and thoughtful, good words, if only someone listens.. Sandra |
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