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She catches her breath
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She catches her breath |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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She catches her breath when through the line she hears your voice amorously calling her name breathlessly waiting in anticipation she spins falling into the depths of your beckoning she sighs in disbelief "the Intensity the chemistry" she becomes fire licking your air suddenly alive glowing and burning for you desiring to crawl beneath the lining of your skin Dark Angel 24/2/01 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
HELLO is there anybody out there.... Get on msn girlie I miss you!! Now to read the poem  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
absolutley what to expect from a goose pimply DA poem yuh |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sheesh. Where did THIS come from? Get back on MSN and TALK.... I will be waiting madam. Hugs  K...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment... [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'breathlessly waiting in anticipation she spins falling into the depths of your beckoning' Excellent writing, DA! Such intensity...I love it!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh and might I add Roo - I think this is shivery too. Guess I should tell you what I THINK of the poem heh. (Too sick to feel like critiquing - otherwise you know I would - so don't think I won't remember this is here...) Love Tigs K...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Desiring to crawl beneath the lining of your skin. Great line. Great poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--A wonderful description of the falling in love feeling. Especially liked the following: "she becomes fire licking your air suddenly alive glowing and burning for you desiring to crawl beneath the lining of your skin" I miss you! Hugs! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Maree- wow...this poem...is so lovely and beautiful! Excellent writing that leaves your readers completely entranced. Must take some pretty awesome inspiration to make one write such as this. Just beautiful...really...leaves me breathless. Take care hon. ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As usual, a very lovely poem Maree--- seems to me you are exploring new horizons...... Wonderful hon----- Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she sighs in disbelief "the Intensity the chemistry" she becomes fire licking your air suddenly alive glowing and burning for you desiring to crawl beneath the lining of your skin =================== Intense is right ... very cool write DA ... sensual and captivating. had to remember to exhale after reading *S* well done poetess of heat  Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As your poem says...."she catches her breath" as she reads this...excellent Maree. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you al lso very much for your lovely replies and fortaking the time to stop by and read I miss you too Martie Hugs all Maree |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DA love, this is outstanding writing, full of heat, full of fire. And quite breathtaking, absolutely excellant work from you. Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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