Open Poetry #12 |
Light springing from darkness. |
Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Relish the Light Lost in the flowing of time that is bleak and barren. Wandering without direction lost in despondency. Then, to be lifted up from the depths of quicksand. The memories come unclouded from the deep pool of fear, of terrors now shared which were never known. To feel the warmness and relish the light of day, At long last out of the grasp of the demon that strangled happiness. Red-uni © 2/00 |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I like this, Red. It shows a struggle and a gaining triumph. May you steal back all that your demons once took. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Red, May the light of day stay until you completely conquer your demons, and a big welcome to passions hope you enjoy your stay. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Oooo dark, but I like it. Welcome ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
There is something about this poem... That just makes me like it! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very cool poem! SEA |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I always love to read when good wins over bad. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy your read |
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