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Red-uni
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0 posted 2001-02-23 12:25 PM


Relish the Light

Lost in the flowing of time that is bleak and barren.
Wandering without direction lost in despondency.
Then, to be lifted up from the depths of quicksand.
The memories come unclouded from the deep pool of fear,
of terrors now shared which were never known.
To feel the warmness and relish the light of day,
At long last out of the grasp of the demon that strangled happiness.

Red-uni © 2/00


© Copyright 2001 Kathy Bonet - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2001-02-23 12:48 PM


I like this, Red. It shows a struggle and a gaining triumph. May you steal back all that your demons once took.
Cerenity
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2 posted 2001-02-24 07:59 PM


Hi Red,

May the light of day stay until you completely conquer your demons, and a big welcome to passions hope you enjoy your stay.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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3 posted 2001-02-24 08:24 PM


Oooo dark, but I like it. Welcome

~FKA Maria Byrne~


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4 posted 2001-02-24 09:06 PM


There is something about this poem...
That just makes me like it!


~*Peachy Be*~

SEA
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5 posted 2001-02-24 10:09 PM


Very cool poem! SEA
inot2B
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6 posted 2001-02-24 10:34 PM


I always love to read when good wins over bad.
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7 posted 2001-02-25 11:00 AM


welcome to passions enjoy your read
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