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Tell Me (Where Is) (1102th post) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Tell me, If tonight, The stars are going to shine And bring my dreams come true, Tell me why love arn't enough when our hearts are belong, Tell me (where Is love?) When we need love, And there Is nolove tonight, Want my all dreams come ture, Because you are here beside me, holding my hand, So now, my asking you why love has to end? And say goodbye, Tell me why And where Is the heaven? Where we can put this love together? and never never let this love go, Tell me (Where Is heart) where we can give our heart away, Tell me(Where is the song) I have heard It before And I want to hear It again, Tell me (Where Is the rain) And when It will rain again Tell me (where Is) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WONDERFUL!!!!! I like this very much........such heartfelt questions.......very well done!!  SEA |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written Vandana... enjoyed your poem... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A fantastic write...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, This was beautiful writing. If you find out the answers, please let me know!! Thought provoking piece. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
thank you all for your kind replies It means a lot to me |
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