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Don't Wake Up the Sun
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Don't Wake Up the Sun |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Don't Wake up the Sun Fall gently, sweet dew drops, don’t wake up the sun Or let purple shadows of dawn come undone Hold on to the lingering fresh early mist For these are the moments that I will be kissed Don’t waken the lily or petals of rose Let dew settle soft before everything glows Still wrapped in a blanket of deep morning haze For these are the most joyous hours of my days When I am awakened by sounds of a lark Which echo so sweetly through mist in the dark I capture these moments, exquisite and true With misty eyed tenderness wakening you The vapor of dawn is the dew of delight The mist of enchantment that came through the night It settles in droplets upon every blade Reflecting the beauty of love that we made Don’t hurry the dawn through the fresh early mist For this is the moment that I will be kissed Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LizzieGal~ Well, you sure kissed my thoughts gently with this early morning beauty ! Give our Ms.Kamla a *hug* from me.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hold on to the lingering fresh early mist For these are the moments that I will be kissed lovely, just lovely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
another lovely one from you, Elizabeth. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Well I'll just have to send a kiss on the mist. Love Sy |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a beautiful way to start the day Liz ~ so many wonderful images are floating through my mind... so lovely! Bonnie |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lizzy..this is just gorgeous...wow. You can't even TRY to tell me what you keep saying... this gem from the lady who 'thinks in meter, and thinks in rhyme' - I well believe it. And Marg(y) - thanks for hug..   K...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
thinks in meter....thinks in rhyme... A perfect description of the most talented poet I know..this is beautiful, Liz.. See how beautiful rhyme can be, Kamla?  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It's so beautifully written that I'm out of words........................................ Thank you, for sharing such a wonderful feeling. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
What can I say I loved it.... ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful poem, perfect imagery, perfect emotion, perfectly delivered. By the way I loved it too. Regards, Olias. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Fall gently, sweet dew drops, don’t wake up the sun Or let purple shadows of dawn come undone Hold on to the lingering fresh early mist For these are the moments that I will be kissed' Elizabeth, this is just unbelievable! Once again, you've amazed me with your talented pen!! I love this! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
'deer - when did I ever say it wasn't beautiful???? HUMPH!  K...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment... [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Your poem is the dusk and dawn of a beautiful day spent at passions. Thank you. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Liz ... to read the sweet rhythm and flow of your words ... simply heavenly. Just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--Oh, how I wish I could write like you...this is glorious!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly glorious!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that too Elizabeth thinks in meter thinks in rhyme a very good description of your poetry and if you add the sage of humanity that always permeates your work then you have the quality that makes thinking that way a gift to our eyes and mind. As usual I love to read your work so much....take care....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I did it agagin!. Forgot to change the user name back. This is LIz, not Severn. Kamla, Help! Marge, Gave Kamla a hug for everyone. Thanks, dear Wynter, Thank you Kathleen, Glad you liked this Sy, THank you for the kiss Bonnie, Your comments are lovely Kamla, Meter and rhyme aren't everything, but thank you for believing in me (in many ways) Balladeer, THank you, master. I appreciate your comments walker. Thank you for your comments Voiceless, Thank you so much Olias, Your remarks are appreciated. Thanks snowpants, Thank you, you warm my heart Liz [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
JRL, Every day at Passions is beautiful. Thanks Kit, my sister in poetry, Thanks for your kind words Martie, And how I wish I could write like you Denise, Thank you, my dear friend ethome, you always have such glorious comments. Thank you Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
May I ditto ethome's glorious comments? *G* This is so lovely, Elizabeth... May I please borrow your pen? And your talent? *G* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I promise to rise late....and hide behind a cloud or two....just for you to have this moment... well done my friend.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I can't add much to what has already been said but I do want you to know that I too loved this wonderful work of poetic grace you blessed us with. Your words and the vision you hold in life tie together so well when you pick up your pen, it is just as if angels are writing for you. This was truely superb just as all your writings are. I applaud your talent and your wonderful way of sharing it with us. |
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