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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-02-23 07:25 AM

dawn's slender fingers
slipping in to wake the day
bring about a sigh

in a beam of light
we get by and through our day
'till the set of sun

in the cool of night
by our candlelight we write
searching beam of light

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-02-23 07:33 AM

Karilea~
And your night must be lit by the flicker
of a thousand candles ...
This is just beautiful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2001-02-23 07:35 AM

Karilea
You poetic fingers slip gently through
a senryu. Very lovely
Liz

BSC

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3 posted 2001-02-23 08:45 AM

Absolutely loving this Karilea ~ Bonnie

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-02-23 02:06 PM

very, very beautiful.....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-02-23 02:36 PM

lovely, Sunshine

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2001-02-23 02:39 PM

Sunshine~ makes me think of Little House On The Prarie!

Beautiful

SEA

Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind

7 posted 2001-02-23 02:43 PM

Another great one!

~*Peachy Be*~

Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-02-23 09:24 PM

"searching beam of light"

Beautiful!

Poeminister

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2001-02-24 01:03 AM

Very nice Karilea
I like how it spends the whole day and makes it special

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-02-24 03:57 AM

I have to agree that in the cool of night many of us write...these are very well written Sunshine...I really enjoyed!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2001-02-25 06:57 PM

It's a good thing a lot of you are both early birds and night owls....just like me! Thank you all so very much for your kind words....

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-25-2001).]

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