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summer's snow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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come here to me my sweet love rest your head 'neath starried sky I want to watch eyes search above inhaling exhales of your sighs I want to feel your seed in bleed echoed every story told I want to be your aching need your very reason to grow old.... I want to dance with you, real slow, fingertips in circling greed... I want to be a summer's snow... a touch of warmth--a winter's feed. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"I want to be a summer's snow... a touch of warmth--a winter's feed." Serenity, I love it! Beautiful write with eloquent flow...very nicely done... Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Ohhh very sensual and wonderful imagery! Loved this!  Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
S/K, Tight, this one! But you had me scratchin' me head, 'cause I caught it before the edit and you had me wonderin' . . . Now it works. ?/K /:^)== =#== |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
It's late here (2:03am) I thought I had put this in my library when I replied earlier...just back to do that... take care, Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want to feel your seed in bleed echoed every story told I want to be your aching need your very reason to grow old.... I want to dance with you, real slow, fingertips in circling greed... I want to be a summer's snow... a touch of warmth--a winter's feed. ================ oh baby...ya know Im diggin this one dont ya... yeah..you know.... wrap that ache in rhyme divine me twin making me smile with this lil gem love ya me twin me No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...this is very, very pretty... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, Beautifully done my friend. Makes me feel nice and warm inside.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
THIS is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful!!! awesome exquisite writing, k!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful, longing and sexy! I wish I'd come up with that title. Mike |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
of course the title caught my attention... I'm partial to summer snow. this was a good read. Snow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey-I'm back...thanks to all, I appreciate the kind comments...I really just wanted to try to write something pretty again...glad you enjoyed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, and as always, written with your special touch. Sandra |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
It's beautiful when your thoughts bring a smile along with the sigh, instead of a tear |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful writing here Serenity and your poem just flowed so smoothly... It's truly an excellent write and I thank you for the smiles and sighs this delightful read leaves me with... ~coco~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My gosh Coco...you always STARTLE me...had forgotten about this one,,,didn't even save it...grin. (I write 'straight to keys' usually) but thank you! Rex? is always nice to sigh smiling... thank you too! Sandra. Enuff said. I know you know I know you know... so? HUGS... (wow...coco woke me up...  ) |
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