Open Poetry #12 |
Missed Your Smile |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I've missed your promise missed your smile Heck, I've missed you by a mile ! Know these arms still embrace you for they can never erase you from the unbumped pages of my heart Dive ! Dive ! for they are archived I smile endlessly on each expedition *Remember that *hug* I promised you ? D E L I V E R E D ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehehehehe yuh |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Don't know who this is for, but a poem like this is sure to be a treasure! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly beautifully wonderful. I love it, and so will whoever this is for. Fabulous as always Take care Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cute, Marge!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you miss my smile? you must be LOONY! i'm smiling here like some cartoony! bump, you say? well bump indeed! i'll give you all the bumps you need! i'm smiling, laughing got a grin beneath my nose under my chin! how could you miss it? it's not gone! bet you don't miss those meds your on! what's that you say? you're NOT on meds? NO??? you're not NUTS? it's me, instead? well, listen poet, let me say..... you brought a smile to ME today. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's not hard to add to my smile now it's wide as that there mile dive dive she says in glee bump you up? It's up to we! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so thats where you've been hiding... playing in the archives huh?... cant think of a better way to spend the day. cute poem margie-gator As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is great SEA |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Thanks. Elizabeth~ Ahhh, mysterious I am. Marsha~ Smiling discreetly here. Denise~ Thx, gal ! Doreen~ LOVE your reply ! ! Glad to share a smile with you any day ! Karilea~ Pleased to see a smile from you. JanetMarie~ Just spreading some overdue smiles. SEA~ Thanks, gal. Balladeer~ *Hugs* n' *stuff* Thanks - me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i like the concept here, marge...i think thats a lovely unique way to put the things across... esp liked "unbumped pages of my heart" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
oh cute Marge... one thing you never miss is a great punch line. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dive ! Dive ! for they are archived I smile endlessly on each expedition ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Deb |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You are so cute when you smile...I want a hug too! ...thanks |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That darn smile of yours is so cute that there is no-way I could let this one go. Love your smiling ways my friend and I know someone out there is just got hugged by them and is smiling in a glow right now. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love that Marge! "from the unbumped pages of my heart." good writing...so much can be said with so few words....write'em up!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's funny how we always meet, In such the strangest ways, I read this poem long after, I sent hugs right back your way ... Your spirit flies the longest path, To touch so many souls, Dear Margie, smiles and hugs again, To you, my heart bestows. How is it that you wrote this wonderful poem for someone a day before I sent you a little note this morning? Easy answer me thinks ... you touch so many fortunate hearts in the same sweet way Marge ... I'm just a 'smiling away here. Your spirit has been visiting again, and I'm always pleased to welcome it along ... such a lovely poem whomever the initial recipient truly was! Best wishes and big {{{hugs}}}, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Thanks, love. It is ALWAYS good to see you here ! BloomingRose~ LOL ! Yeah - I have a tendency to get 'punchy' sometimes ! Thanks for your sweet reply. Martie~ And you've ALWAYS got a *hug*, my sweet Sis. MarkB~ And YOU - always knowing just when to *hug* back ! I love you ... DM ! You've got a glow all your own - and it's contagious ! ETHome~ Thanks, my friend. I'm a'writing ! Kit~ Yes - you reach out and our spirits touch. Just happens that way, huh ? You're a doll ! And ... I needed that morning e-mail hug. Thanks, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
{{{{{warm welcome hugs}}}}} right back at ya! |
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Love_is_Pain Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 16 |
That was awesome, i really injoyed the Dive Dive...keep writin |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Wow ! I've been triple-dipper hugged by you today ! Thanks, hon. LoveIsPain~ Thank you for the read and the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Girl this is special and any one HUGGED by you has been blessed by meeting a real friend and we all need to know that out there, there's people like you, life does not always grant many chances to have real loving friends, hugging you back,,, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I never was much at the pool - but I can dive - I assure you - (can I get a hug too?) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
{{{{{{HUGS}}}}}}}} Margie girl this is wonderful and it needs a bump Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Good stuff Marge! I like this one alot. It's fun and upbeat and a joy to read! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one brought smiles to many faces... but then... you're good at doing that! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Thanks always for your friendship. Wilfred - Wilfred ... Marsha~ Thankee, gal ! TennesseeAgel~ Glad to leave a smile where I've been ! Thank you. Suthern~ Hey, gal ! I like giving smiles ! Thanks bunches for wearing one ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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