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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-02-17 12:29 PM



I've missed your promise
missed your smile
Heck, I've missed you by a mile !

Know these arms still embrace you
for they can never erase you
from the unbumped pages of my heart

Dive !
Dive !
for they are archived
I smile endlessly on each expedition


*Remember that *hug* I promised you ?
D E L I V E R E D


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-02-17 12:33 PM


hehehehehehe yuh
Elizabeth
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2 posted 2001-02-17 12:36 PM


Don't know who this is for, but a poem like this is sure to be a treasure!
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3 posted 2001-02-17 01:31 PM


Margie girl, this is utterly beautifully wonderful. I love it, and so will whoever this is for.
Fabulous as always
Take care
Bubbles




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Denise
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4 posted 2001-02-17 01:55 PM


Cute, Marge!!
doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-02-17 02:09 PM


you miss my smile?
you must be LOONY!
i'm smiling here
like some cartoony!
bump, you say?
well bump indeed!
i'll give you all
the bumps you need!
i'm smiling, laughing
got a grin
beneath my nose
under my chin!
how could you miss it?
it's not gone!
bet you don't miss
those meds your on!
what's that you say?
you're NOT on meds?
NO??? you're not NUTS?
it's me, instead?
well, listen poet,
let me say.....

you brought a smile
to ME today.





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6 posted 2001-02-17 02:15 PM


It's not hard
to add to my smile
now it's wide
as that there mile
dive dive
she says in glee
bump you up?
It's up to we!

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-02-17 03:44 PM


so thats where you've been hiding...
playing in the archives huh?...
cant think of a better way to spend the day.
cute poem margie-gator

As sure as God made wine
you can't wrap your arms around a memory
In the dark for me
youre the candle flame that flickers to life
~Mission UK~

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8 posted 2001-02-17 08:02 PM


Marge~ this is great SEA
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9 posted 2001-02-17 08:09 PM



Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-02-17 08:21 PM


Walt~
Thanks.

Elizabeth~
Ahhh, mysterious I am.

Marsha~
Smiling discreetly here.

Denise~
Thx, gal !

Doreen~
LOVE your reply ! !
Glad to share a smile with you any day !

Karilea~
Pleased to see a smile from you.

JanetMarie~
Just spreading some overdue smiles.

SEA~
Thanks, gal.

Balladeer~
*Hugs* n' *stuff*
Thanks - me too !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-02-17 08:28 PM


i like the concept here, marge...i think thats a lovely unique way to put the things across...

esp liked "unbumped pages of my heart"

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12 posted 2001-02-17 08:38 PM


oh cute Marge... one thing you never miss is a great punch line.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dive !
Dive !
for they are archived
I smile endlessly on each expedition
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Deb



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13 posted 2001-02-17 08:43 PM


Marge--You are so cute when you smile...I want a hug too! ...thanks

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14 posted 2001-02-18 09:50 AM


That darn smile of yours is so cute that there is no-way I could let this one go. Love your smiling ways my friend and I know someone out there is just got hugged by them and is smiling in a glow right now.
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15 posted 2001-02-18 09:52 AM


I love that Marge! "from the unbumped pages of my heart." good writing...so much can be said with so few words....write'em up!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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16 posted 2001-02-18 10:16 AM


It's funny how we always meet,
In such the strangest ways,
I read this poem long after,
I sent hugs right back your way ...

Your spirit flies the longest path,
To touch so many souls,
Dear Margie, smiles and hugs again,
To you, my heart bestows.

How is it that you wrote this wonderful poem for someone a day before I sent you a little note this morning? Easy answer me thinks ... you touch so many fortunate hearts in the same sweet way Marge ... I'm just a 'smiling away here. Your spirit has been visiting again, and I'm always pleased to welcome it along ... such a lovely poem whomever the initial recipient truly was!

Best wishes and big {{{hugs}}},
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2001-02-18 10:37 AM


Kaile~
Thanks, love.
It is ALWAYS good to see you here !

BloomingRose~
LOL !
Yeah - I have a tendency to get 'punchy' sometimes !
Thanks for your sweet reply.

Martie~
And you've ALWAYS got a *hug*, my sweet Sis.

MarkB~
And YOU - always knowing just when to *hug* back !
I love you ... DM !
You've got a glow all your own - and it's contagious !

ETHome~
Thanks, my friend.
I'm a'writing !

Kit~
Yes - you reach out and our spirits touch.
Just happens that way, huh ?
You're a doll !
And ... I needed that morning e-mail hug.
Thanks, sweetie.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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18 posted 2001-02-18 11:04 AM


{{{{{warm welcome hugs}}}}} right back at ya!


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19 posted 2001-02-18 11:20 AM


That was awesome, i really injoyed the Dive Dive...keep writin
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-02-18 04:15 PM


Kit~
Wow ! I've been triple-dipper hugged by you today !
Thanks, hon.

LoveIsPain~
Thank you for the read and the reply.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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21 posted 2001-02-19 09:38 AM


Hi Marge,

Girl this is special and any one HUGGED by you has been blessed by meeting a real friend and we all need to know that out there, there's people like you, life does not always grant many chances to have real loving friends, hugging you back,,,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Wilfred Yeats
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22 posted 2001-02-19 10:16 AM


I never was much at the pool - but I can dive - I assure you - (can I get a hug too?)
Marsha
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23 posted 2001-02-19 04:21 PM


{{{{{{HUGS}}}}}}}}
Margie girl
this is wonderful and it needs a bump  
Take care
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-19-2001).]

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24 posted 2001-02-19 06:07 PM


Good stuff Marge! I like this one alot. It's fun and upbeat and a joy to read!
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25 posted 2001-02-20 12:50 PM


This one brought smiles to many faces... but then... you're good at doing that! *S*
Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2001-02-25 04:25 PM


Cerenity~
Thanks always for your friendship.

Wilfred - Wilfred ...

Marsha~
Thankee, gal !

TennesseeAgel~
Glad to leave a smile where I've been !
Thank you.

Suthern~
Hey, gal !
I like giving smiles !
Thanks bunches for wearing one !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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