Open Poetry #12 |
TwodayLove (inspiration of old) |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Twoday Love Replace for me now this word called 'today' So simple, one word, for me becomes 'two' In each of my moments, thoughts come to mind Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you. When morning arrives, your words then appear My heart skips a beat, my thoughts swirl anew. Around and around, from bottom to top Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you. And leaving me after, the glow stays awhile This one simple word, the one changed to two. Look forward tomorrow, for the 'twoday' Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you. To be, together, two loving, tomorrows Each memory new, replaces the sorrows. ~Wynter/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Here's hoping for TwoDay to come for us both. Love this, Wynter. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sandra, hope all is well with you {{hugss}} ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Now why is such a pretty piece, and such delightful thoughts, dropping off the screen? Hope your twomorrows are many times better than your twodays! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ What a delightful piece to find - TWOday holds the TWOmorrow we looked for in our YESterday ! What an inspirational little piece of thought ! ~Hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wynter~ yes the word two is just so lovely. i agree...this was a beautiful and sincere expression from your heart. thanks for a wonderful read. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wynter~ yes the word two is just so lovely. i agree...this was a beautiful and sincere expression from your heart. thanks for a wonderful read. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Stop reading my heart...please. This is so.....! (You know what I mean, right?) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marilyn One day those Twomorrows will come around again...thank you huggz Marge yes life is always better when coupled I would think.. thanks Marge Amy thank you for your kind words (doubly too) J sure I know what you mean. I not only can read your heart I can read your mind.. I love that phrase and may borrow it from you... thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful!!! I especially like the ending... and the entire idea of twoday. *S* Well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Had to read this twice, what a great piece here, Maureen. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
suthern and Kathleen..thank you for the twice overs..yes I like the twodays and twomorrows to come... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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