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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-02-21 08:12 AM


Twoday Love

Replace for me now this word called 'today'
So simple, one word, for me becomes 'two'
In each of my moments, thoughts come to mind
Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you.

When morning arrives, your words then appear
My heart skips a beat, my thoughts swirl anew.
Around and around, from bottom to top
Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you.

And leaving me after, the glow stays awhile
This one simple word, the one changed to two.
Look forward tomorrow, for the 'twoday'
Dreaming my feelings, while thinking of you.

To be, together, two loving, tomorrows
Each memory new, replaces the sorrows.


~Wynter/M



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-02-21 09:50 AM


Here's hoping for TwoDay to come for us both. Love this, Wynter.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-02-21 08:35 PM


thank you Sandra, hope all is well with you {{hugss}}

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



kcsgrandma
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3 posted 2001-02-21 11:52 PM


Now why is such a pretty piece, and such delightful thoughts, dropping off the screen? Hope your twomorrows are many times better than your twodays!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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4 posted 2001-02-24 12:10 PM


Wynter~
What a delightful piece to find -

TWOday holds the TWOmorrow we looked for in our YESterday !

What an inspirational little piece of thought !
~Hugs~
~*Marge*~


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Aimster
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5 posted 2001-02-24 12:20 PM


wynter~
yes the word two is just so lovely.
i agree...this was a beautiful and sincere
expression from your heart. thanks for a
wonderful read.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Aimster
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6 posted 2001-02-24 12:20 PM


wynter~
yes the word two is just so lovely.
i agree...this was a beautiful and sincere
expression from your heart. thanks for a
wonderful read.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


JLR
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7 posted 2001-02-24 12:23 PM


Stop reading my heart...please. This is so.....! (You know what I mean, right?)


nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-02-25 07:05 AM


Marilyn
One day those Twomorrows will come around again...thank you huggz

Marge
yes life is always better when coupled I would think.. thanks Marge

Amy
thank you for your kind words (doubly too)

J
sure I know what you mean. I not only can read your heart I can read your mind.. I love that phrase and may borrow it from you... thank you

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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9 posted 2001-02-26 05:08 PM


How beautiful!!! I especially like the ending... and the entire idea of twoday. *S* Well done!
Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-02-27 09:16 AM


Had to read this twice, what a great piece here, Maureen.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2001-02-27 05:58 PM


suthern
and
Kathleen..thank you for the twice overs..yes I like the twodays and twomorrows to come...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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