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Angel Eyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Angel Eyes Silky softness awaits my touch. Sensual pleasures awaken lust. Appreciation beckons me. Admiration enticing me. A desire to know how angels feel. Her luscious lips lure and appeal. I brush silky hair from her face and pull her close in warm embrace. I kiss her lips and touch her thigh as heaven opens before my eyes. A warm caress and a silky kiss let me know what I have missed. Stay with me angel eyes and share some heaven by my side. Take me for an angel ride. Let me see heaven in your eyes. Jameslee@February22,2001 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this should be a song, I already hear the music playing! I remember a song "Angel Eyes" but I can't remember the artist. I really liked this one! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stay with me angel eyes and share some heaven by my side. Take me for an angel ride. Let me see heaven in your eyes. ============== ahhhh James when you are this inspired...  this is lovely SBJ... romantic, sensual and full of anticipation and I like the way you kept the angel theme flowing in this and brought it all together in the last verse with the lines of Heaven. very well done!! Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
VERY nice.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Very nice enjoyed the read. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A beautiful and wonderful write James! Nathan |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You bring sincerity to a unique level with your poem, James. It is lovely. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, it sounds like it could be a song. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very romantic...beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, now this is definately a song here.........beautiful! Love it when you write like this  SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the lovely responses...James |
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