»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #12
»
to all you beautiful lady poets!
| Open Poetry #12 |
|
to all you beautiful lady poets! |
|
|
Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana 
|
I do believe that I am going blind but ladies, you know I don't truly mind. I've come to love the style of poetry and all the pretty faces that I see. Don't mind please, for I'm a gentleman but honest to the core, that's what I am. in reading every word and everything I've heard Believe me when I tell you I'm impressed! I think that all of you do give your best! You pour your heart into the lines so fine I know that I've been missing life in rhyme. So is it true a man can learn to write? by visiting and reading Passion's site? I honor all of you and everything you do There's beauty from page 1 to 25 and looking at you keeps my heart alive. Don't stop your lovely verse I'm falling, unrehearsed. Oh, man, I can't believe you all have time! you all should be escorted somewhere fine, a dance, a movie and a glass of wine so tell your men, or I will make you mine! (this is awful, but I'm working on it) Dennis [This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 02-21-2001).] |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Dennis - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh you.....this is sooooo cute....(he's my brother, I can hug him).. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-21-2001).] |
||
|
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I thought it was perfect. Very cute and wonderful gesture. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'll hug him too Kathleen!! Thank you sir, this is so sweet.  |
||
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Wunnerful words of sweetness.  I like it! |
||
|
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i'll take the dance, movie, and the wine......giggle helen |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im free tonight...and Id love to have dinner with a gentleman who writes such sweet poetry...welcome to Passions Dennis |
||
Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Hey hon, This was just wonderful. It takes one beautiful Passon's writer to know another. Thank you for this wonderful piece and this tribute to all of these women. We are the lucky ones. We have men like you boosting our egos and reminding us that we can write the pieces that men like to read too. Kathleen, you are so lucky to have a brother like that. Do you have more brothers like that? Oh wait, I'm the innocent.... Though the way that it is we are all going to have to take him out for dancing, dinner, and wine. Thanks again Dennis. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
||
|
2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Dennis, I do believe you have succeeded in your quest to capture the hearts of all these beautiful Women of Passions. Melton |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen, is he really your brother? Then give him another hug for us....what a treasure! |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes! don;'t encourage him I don't know if he'll be safe when his picture comes through ROFLI'm kidding, he only has so many hours a week anyway!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-22-2001).] |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my love your words from the beginning till the end.... especially the end lines were really charming. loved reading it. Charisma |
||
|
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*smooch*wink* ,,,, awwww,,,, so special..... *grin |
||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isn't this so sweet?! I love this you are scoring points left and right with this one giving us ladies a nice smile and some warm fuzzies too.........very nicely done..... SEA |
||
|
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*Grinning* I needed to feel beautiful today! Thank you! Really nice flow to this. I don't think it's aweful at all! Will look forward to reading more from you. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
