Open Poetry #12 |
What You Gonna Do (A song?) |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What You Gonna Do (A song?) When this life gets you down. Women come and go and put you down. When they don't have time for you. Tell me what the heck you're gonna do. How many times can one woman put you down. Could I let her go and look around. And I was just wondering why I take it so personally. Should I want to be with a woman that doesn't want to be with me. Now I'm singing why must I so desperately hang onto a woman running away from me. When a girl tells you it's just not cool. She feels out of place and uncomfortable, why not just say farewell, kiss her goodbye and wish her well. And now I'm singing why can't I just let her be and let what will be will be. Girl if you don't want my company hit the road I set you free. Girl if you don't want to be around other women are in this town. Girl if you don't really care why should I waste my time being there. When a woman figures out you're not her soulmate why pout and cry. She's the only one who can see who she likes and know the reasons why. If you're not her ideal romance tell her thanks for trying and thanks for the chance. Girl I could have loved you for a thousand years. Now I feel unneeded and I'm out of here. Girl I would have given you all of my time but not any more now it's cruisin time. And now I'm singin thank you for the chance. My life needed a little romance. And now I really must say goodbye. Thank you for the lovely try. Why be lonely just look around. Beautiful women can be found. They are looking just like you. When they grab you what the heck you gonna do. And I was just thinking do I really care to be with a woman that doesn't care for me. How far will this pain flow til I say the proper goodbyes and let her go. Everything is up to you. What the heck you gonna do? Jameslee@February20,2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Hey this is great! Now to put the music to it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James, I think I HEAR the music.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh sweetie...I can hear you singing this loud and clear...this is great James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seems to me....you need a new radio station my friend........ I liked this........SEA |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sounds like a hit to me! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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