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The Taste of Love
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The Taste of Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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First, I would like to say I'm sorry for missing so many poems lately. I am here with the flu, and just now able to spend more than 5 minutes at the computer. Promise to catch up  S I've tasted love a time or two and thought I did some other times The first so sweet, so rich and new while others turn to bitter wine. Dilemna comes when tasting need while insecure about the source I feel the love, and do the deed, but later, veering wild off course. Thus loving leaves me not yet full though plenty of him's been consumed still longing for the truth to pull away from lies which he presumed. The taste of love, so good so sweet can take a heart and truly heal. Again you feel the strongest beat and drink the nectar purely real. When next you're offered luscious taste make sure it's true, no drunken waste.. |
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Puck Junior Member
since 2001-02-21
Posts 14Oberon's Palace |
Sandra this is so wonderful, I really like this one, you can really write well Catch the fairy dust, this is wonderful Iam that merry wanderer of the night I jest to Oberon, and make him smile Puck |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Impeccable rhythm and rhyme with a sweet message. So did you compose this before the flu set in? I hope so, otherwise the rocking motion might have done you in. Get well'er', soon! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed the next drink should be your last. . . wonderful Sandra. . . get well soon!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - sorry to hear about the flu, had it myself and goodness, sick isn't the word. Your poem rings so true, never knowing if a real one, or another is the one that's there. I did enjoy this writing. BC |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, "I feel the love and do the deed, but later veering off course". This is perfect... And you know I'm wishing you well soon.. Love, Elise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If only that taste came with guarantees so we'd know up-front whether we were drinking from the hurting or healing cup! *S* This is great... get well soon! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I for one hope your next drink of love quenches your thirst for a lifetime. This was truely beautiful and so refreshing to read. Seems to be alot of water flowing in the poems tonight and I am really liking that. Welcome back!!  |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
A great poem! I love how you use love with wines! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
sometimes - we need some nourishment we take from nearly any source to sustain us in our search - I really liked this |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sad to say, I cannot write this well when feeling terrific, let alone when I have the flu! Well done! |
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