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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2001-02-20 06:57 PM


Dawn's gray horizon looming same as was the day before
Cloaked in uniformity , my garb of daily wear
Lethargic feet move stolidly down endless corridors
The meet and greet of scheduled tasks seems well beyond repair

Outside , the world immutable , confronts a practiced mask
It's graven features fit the frame-work life's super-imposed
Denied outward expression yet in sunlight I will bask
For I alone possess the key to how much is exposed

The work-day clock of drudgery commands and I obey
Necessity , that mistress harsh , accepts no lesser bribe
So I serve her externally and hide the rest away
While unbeknown , to save a few , exists a furtive scribe

Whose heart rejects the metronome and beats at diff'rent pace
Constructing music from the din of toil's machinery
Not giving hint through gesture false nor countenance of face
The changes that take place inside pass imperceptibly

The breeze that's given to refresh stirs not one single leaf
Beyond the windows that look in on perfect summer's day
The cascade of my thoughts washes away mere business grief
As calm descends quite liesurely ignoring outside fray

Where not much changes by the hour , the day , the week , the year
My mask in place , I smile , for it cannot reach me in here .




[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-22-2001).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-02-20 08:57 PM


Great expression, Dr. Moose. I can so totally relate to this. Well done!
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2 posted 2001-02-21 01:42 PM


"While unbeknown , to save a few , exists a furtive scribe
Whose heart rejects the metronome and beats at diff'rent pace"

I'm glad to be part of the few who have the privilege of knowing that furtive scribe. *S* For his heart beats at a wonderful pace... Well done!

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2001-02-22 03:35 PM


Denise and suthern ,
My thanks as always for your kind comments.
Doc

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4 posted 2001-02-23 11:34 PM


"For I alone possess the key to how much is exposed"

Funny, isn't it, how we live within our own chosen layers of vulnerability and definition. Thanks for this important poem, Doc. Sorry I missed it earlier.

Claire


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2001-02-25 10:00 AM


Claire ,
Thank you , that was one of the key lines .
We couldn't very well go around telling everyone what is really going on in there could we ? ( they'd lock the whole bunch of us up !).
Doc

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