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A Nice Place To Visit ( Maybe I'll Move There )
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A Nice Place To Visit ( Maybe I'll Move There ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Hidden beyond our field of sight there lies a wond'rous place To reach it one must always travel by a diff'rent route Un-guarded there Her Majesty , by virtue of her grace Awaits to re-define those things that you once thought you knew No sign-posts guide you to her realm , no map can show the way But none are needed for it's very easy to be found This place of shifting boundries that change with each passing day May be en-visioned only when you're not on solid ground Your invitation's been engraved with invisible ink Passenger pidgeons waft it from an un-disclosed address For only here would it make sense that things once thought extinct Can re-emerge from history the skies to re-possess A billion wings aloft eclipse the light of mid-day sun Once more un-fettered fly as if there were no gravity Approaching the horizon where such things have just begun A sojourn of the soul refreshed , as in it's infancy Count Logic's banished from here by the fabled brothers Grimm And Reason has been ousted for his crimes against the state Insanity cast out his twin while acting on a whim But left are dreams to be fulfilled upon tomorrow's slate This is the place I visit just as often as I can For it displays it's grandeur in a constant flux of light Devoid of all influence of the cold hard facts it stands Forever cloaked majestic'ly in wonder of first sight There's no where else I've been as yet where time is better spent When once again it's all brand new , you've reached " Bewilderment " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever idea! I liked it bunches! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Doc, I love your poem, but please keep it under wrap We wouldn't want our "'Wilderment" to become a tourist trap! Love this clever one.  Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Neat!! I like it! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Passing shadows, I'm glad you enjoyed , stop by and visit anytime . Doc Claire , There's much more room here than there was in " Befuddlement " which was too confined and confusing .I'm so glad you stopped by and I hope ( like you ) the word doesn't spread too fast. Voiceless, Thank you , you're going to have to speak up a little though ( Not ) just kidding ! Thanks again ! Doc Doc |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting, I like it lots! Sandra |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
catalinamoon , This is favorite re-curring theme of mine , that it's not always necessary to change , so much as to change your perspective . Glad you liked . Doc |
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