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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-02-20 08:33 AM

Our Feet are Clay

Your feet, your feet are made of clay
Your tears, your tears melt them away
They thaw into pools of sorrow
That sees no end or tomorrow.

Please dry your tears, shed your fears and
The clay will harden from your cheer.
Just sing yourself a mollify
To keep the smile within your eye.

Never ever lose sight your light
And hold your candle high in height
Fly yourself to El Dorado
Just spread your wings and you will go.

There you will eat on candied dish
And wash it with exotic wish.
You’ll be the queen of beauties seem
And live within this lovely dream.

So do not cry and melt your clay
Just fly yourself to Mandalay.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-20 08:39 AM

Shoot....I was going to pick out a favorite line, but as I read, and re-read this piece, all lines quickly, assuredly, became favorite lines....how could I not like them all?

Well done Sy....thank you for the smiles....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-20 09:05 AM

Will you also be there to greet her if she arrives there? *s just wondering

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

3 posted 2001-02-20 09:23 AM

very nice....really like this too...hopes and dreams.....sigh...very nicely written

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-20 01:24 PM

Your feet, your feet are made of clay
Your tears, your tears melt them away
They thaw into pools of sorrow
That sees no end or tomorrow.

Please dry your tears, shed your fears and
The clay will harden from your cheer.
====================

Never ever lose sight your light
And hold your candle high in height
=====================
There you will eat on candied dish
And wash it with exotic wish.
====================
So do not cry and melt your clay
Just fly yourself to Mandalay.
=================

so where can I book a flight....
or shall I hitch a ride on Randy's wings

very cool poem S-babes....
love the word play and inner rhyme and repetative theme ..
human clay turns to putty in your hands
*winkiewinkie*
later-playdough-gator

me

Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-02-20 03:56 PM

Sunshine,
Glad I could make you smile. *L*

Nakd,
But of cource that's where I'm writing from.

Corazon,
They are two of the things that are still free. *L*

JM,
Randys wings will be just fine. In fact I just looked in on him and of all things he was putting a saddle on his back.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

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