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Verma
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 80
Midlands, England

0 posted 2001-01-13 02:57 PM

Path Of Life

I wake each morn’ and walk my life,
And hope my path don’t lead to strife,
The decisions which I choose to make
Affect my mood and the path I take

I wake each morn’, take dog for walk,
And hear people moan as they talk
People look at me as I pass them by
I stare right back and wonder why?

And then one day as I walked my life
I met my daughter, son and wife
I saw the house where I would live
The wedding ring that I would give

I continue on and walk life some more
Another day, another door,
My children grow and leave their home
And all the safety they have known

Then as they grow, they bring to me,
A grandson to bounce upon my knee
The feeling of walking this life through time
Makes me say “Thank you” for this life of mine

~~STEVE~~
January 2000

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-01-13 03:05 PM

This is a beautiful and it was wonderfully written...a brilliant job!

Nathan

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-01-13 03:41 PM

this one make me smile, wonderful penned...loved and enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-01-13 03:45 PM

life is indeed a series of changes, each bringing us through different stages, and you have quite elequently described how fleeting, yet full of joy, it can be.... thank you for the read... enjoyed this! (enjoy those grandkids! they grow up quick, too

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Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-13 03:45 PM

What a lovely journey you've taken me through this walk ... it's so nice to be able to look back and say "thank you", very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Verma
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 80
Midlands, England

5 posted 2001-01-14 07:39 AM

Thank you all for your kind words.....

I just hope that everyone can think of something they can say "Thank you" for....

~ Steve ~

Verma
Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 80
Midlands, England

6 posted 2001-04-06 05:53 PM

This one i love too..

I have been away from my machine for a while and have not yet been able to say thanks...

~~Steve~~

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