Open Poetry #12 |
Path of life... |
Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Path Of Life I wake each morn’ and walk my life, And hope my path don’t lead to strife, The decisions which I choose to make Affect my mood and the path I take I wake each morn’, take dog for walk, And hear people moan as they talk People look at me as I pass them by I stare right back and wonder why? And then one day as I walked my life I met my daughter, son and wife I saw the house where I would live The wedding ring that I would give I continue on and walk life some more Another day, another door, My children grow and leave their home And all the safety they have known Then as they grow, they bring to me, A grandson to bounce upon my knee The feeling of walking this life through time Makes me say “Thank you” for this life of mine ~~STEVE~~ January 2000 |
||
© Copyright 2001 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved | |||
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a beautiful and it was wonderfully written...a brilliant job! Nathan |
||
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this one make me smile, wonderful penned...loved and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
||
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
life is indeed a series of changes, each bringing us through different stages, and you have quite elequently described how fleeting, yet full of joy, it can be.... thank you for the read... enjoyed this! (enjoy those grandkids! they grow up quick, too ) |
||
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely journey you've taken me through this walk ... it's so nice to be able to look back and say "thank you", very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
||
Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Thank you all for your kind words..... I just hope that everyone can think of something they can say "Thank you" for.... ~ Steve ~ |
||
Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
This one i love too.. I have been away from my machine for a while and have not yet been able to say thanks... ~~Steve~~ |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |