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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2001-02-19 01:57 PM

Do you hear the whisper,
...soft whisper of the dawn,
As earth awakens to new day,
...night's blanket soon begone?

Waking meadows, morning's dew,
...wild flowers by Helios kissed,
Goldenrod and sun's first rays,
...embraced in nature's tryst.

Clear flowing stream, majestic oak,
...stands guard, lone sentinel,
Over fauna; blooming flora,
...rainbowed 'cross the dell.

Upon the winds, floats butterfly,
...on silken angel wing,
Dancing to day's birthing rays,
...to warmth of newday's bring.

Restricted by no earthen bind,
...soars golden butterfly,
For butterflies, need never cry,
...as soar into dawn's sky.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 02-19-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-19 02:06 PM

Mike...first, you KNEW I would enjoy this one....and second....can we publish it in the next newsletter? Please? {~,^} Pretty please?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-02-19 02:07 PM

OH, this is so lovely and caressing to the sinew of my being. Beautifully rendered dear poet.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-02-19 02:08 PM

Mike,
I like. Seems like something new is passig through.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-19 02:38 PM

Upon the winds, floats butterfly,
...on silken angel wing,
Dancing to day's birthing rays,
...to warmth of newday's bring.

Restricted by no earthen bind,
...soars golden butterfly,
For butterflies, need never cry,
...as soar into dawn's sky.

==========================

absolutely stunning Mike ...
butterflies seem to be inspiring beautiful things ...
brings in the dreams of spring

"For butterflies, need never cry,"

very cool poem

Love is my religion
I believe in nothing else
to find that inspiration
live that inner vision
love is my religion
I believe in you.
~T Kimmel~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-02-19 02:54 PM

Mike--This is beautiful...you have given me a bit of spring fever with your words. Thanks.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2001-02-20 12:22 PM

Add a butterfly to a golden poet's pen and
you have a masterpiece...Mike this is one of
the most beautiful poems I've ever had the
pleasure...the honor to read. I could never
do justice to your work by trying to capture
the essence of your weaves...so I'll stand
back and simply enjoy them and Hope that you
know how truly beautiful they are...you are
a gifted poet...thank you from the bottom of
my heart for sharing your gift here~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-02-25 04:13 PM

Mike~

First you write the night
Then you spread the yawn of dawning
In shades of golden light
Rising softly across the morning

What a LOVELY feeling this piece leaves with the reader.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-02-25 09:18 PM

Very lovely, Mike!! Sooooo pretty!!

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

9 posted 2001-02-25 10:00 PM

wonderful images in this poem, Mike
enjoyed the softness...

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

10 posted 2001-02-25 10:51 PM

Dancing to day's birthing rays,
...to warmth of newday's bring.

Such tender images and thoughts within your poem. You always seem to find new ways of saying just what your reader longs to hear. Thank you for this beauty.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

11 posted 2001-02-26 12:06 PM

Now this I like.....what an inspiration for me to take pen in hand. Beautiful!

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

12 posted 2001-02-26 12:09 PM

Very good. I could imagine being outside in the coutry and just enjoying nature.

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