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The Echo in the Night (another almost live recital)
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The Echo in the Night (another almost live recital) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so beautiful ..........yet so sad.....helen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its quiet now… And though these searing dreams have stopped I can still hear the echo of your heartbeat I can still smell the sweetness of your perfume Just as if you were here… These dreams have no joy left I can smell the memories I can still taste your warm lips… ========================= very well done p-man .. emotive and powerful free verse and what a nice way to start ones day ... a girl could get used to hearing your voice first thing in the morn  love the way ya touch on those T's lol seriously tho... this is a well written bittersweet piece great write parker love the haunted soulful essence of this Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"I hate you in my night, in my bed, and there you wait, You wait for me, to be alone, where you can come to me Where you can, love me…. But you don’t belong there, cause your not there, not the real you…" ------------------------------ hauntily, painfully, beautiful, love... dont hate me.... *snicker snicker*and in the words of johnny cougar... "it hurts so good... come on baby make it hurt so good! sometimes LOVE dont feel like it should you make it...hurt so good..." jcmellencamp |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose you could say I hear plenty of these echo's...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Helen, thank you for your response.  Janet, thank you..... well you know what they say... to touch those t's right... you gotta wrap your tongue around them. dg, thanks sweets... and yes it hurts so good. James, its a tormenting thing isn't it. Parker |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is way cool, Parker! I think it is my favorite of those you have done this way. Very nice writing, and the reading only makes it better. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice recital Parker! You captured the mood of this sad but beautiful work so very well...very enjoyable my friend!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
what a 'good morning'... nice to hear your voice..anytime of day....  love the way this ones written..your reading just adds to the pleasure of the words... hugs, g there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS... -unknown |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marilyn, thank you... I think my voice and the recording was a little off though. ethome, thank you good poet. Their fun to do. dg, thank you sweets... Parker |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
honest to goodness, this is awesome......and your voice......silk. SEA |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I thought I saw this on "Women's TV"??  Just in case...I'll add it it to my Library. Such poetry, puts me in a whirwind.  It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
when did the dream end and the dreaming begin...this is incredible! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The echo never seems to fade... at least it feels that way! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Haleyja, Enjoyed the read and recital. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, so silk you say, and what about you do you like silk.  Marina, you'd better stop dancing you'll get your arm chair all dizzy. JLR, thank you very much. VoiceLess, thank you agin. Seymour, thank you, and glad to hear it. Parker |
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