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Within the River's Flow
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Within the River's Flow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Within the River's Flow I remember how smooth the words seemed to flow from her ruby lips. Nice sweet words like "I Love you" and "Give me a kiss." You never had to say it twice. Even before the words were thru I gave you one of a billion kisses I saved just for you. I held you close and I promised you so much. I wanted a lifetime to feel your warm touch. What is time in a river where love flows? When you were mine my love lived to overflow. Now the words from your lips seem to hesitate. A river that no longer flows seems to be my fate. And I wonder if my love can still continue to grow without those precious words within the rivers flow. Jameslee@February18,2001 Preciousnicesweetwords. [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a sad, beautiful, and lovely write....wonderful poem, James! Nathan |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful said. Those magic words are very hard to say, as love matures. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
The river title caught me. The beautiful words held me. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from you, I know that it can. . . superb James. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
very sad but well stated enjoyed reading this one |
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