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in pinks of blue
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in pinks of blue |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There is much that I can do-- I'll paint your world in pinks of blue. I'll ease the pain of gravity cut the cord and set you free even if you drift from me? I'll still be here to see you through. And everytime you feel an ache? I feel it with my own heartbreak. With every tear roll down your cheek? I get bruises on my knees from humble prayer and unashamed into God's ear, I weep your name. I tremble at the thought of you, a kink of think--in pinks of blue... yes there is much that I can do, but never can I un-love you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I tremble at the thought of you, a kink of think--in pinks of blue... yes there is much that I can do, but never can I un-love you." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a nice chunk of my soul here...........hits so hard into what I'm thinking and feeling tonight.....I just love this!  SEA |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem is light.... nice to know that someone is holding our strings in prayer when we go floating. Bob <>< |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very nice...sigh.....and yep, the heart balks at that unlove concept...once love is love...it just is.....nice work here |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lots of lovely painting going on....me? I just need a can of turpentine... well done Serenity.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is much that I can do-- I'll paint your world in pinks of blue. I'll ease the pain of gravity cut the cord and set you free even if you drift from me? I'll still be here to see you through. And everytime you feel an ache? I feel it with my own heartbreak. With every tear roll down your cheek? I get bruises on my knees from humble prayer and unashamed into God's ear, I weep your name. ================== *sigh* ... I do so love the ache set to rhyme divine you already know I love this one... I told ya in the mirror this morn *wink* love ya sen ... me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . in pinks of blue. . . the colors of life. . . wonderful serenity. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
too bad the heart doesn't have a delete button--"Send him to the Recycling Bin until further consideration!" ah ha ha....sigh... thanks all! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I tremble at the thought of you, a kink of think--in pinks of blue... yes there is much that I can do, but never can I un-love you. Well said Sista! Love it! Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved the title of this poem And the message you bring Liz |
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