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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-02-07 09:57 PM


I wrote this thinking about a little girl who was murdered at the age of 3 by a 13 year old boy it sadened me to listen to the news report on the tv.
" Now Gone "

Tiny hands, tiny feet
Pitter, patter down the hall
A sound familiar
Now gone

Smiling faces, Laughing
Toys all over the floor
A sight seen many times
Now gone

Soft hugs, sweet kisses
Jumping on mum's lap
Feelings shared
Now gone

Messy hands, dirty feet
Making Mud pies out in the puddles
A vision seen in the rain
Now gone

Tears, bumped knee's
You'd run to your mum
Band-Aids on skin, once there
Now gone

Taken pieces, parts missing
Many memories remembered
Chance to be written
Now gone

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-02-07 10:02 PM


This is just heartbreaking..........so very sad...........you wrote of this very gently.   -SEA
Celeste
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2 posted 2001-02-07 11:13 PM


Brought tears to my eyes.........You've captured the essence of a 3 yr old beautifully.

To capture and live a moment is truly living


Sven
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3 posted 2001-02-12 08:37 PM


this is heart wrenching. . .

sadly told. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2001-02-13 11:33 AM


Yes this is a very sad and powerful piece....great writing!

Nathan

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2001-03-11 06:33 AM


Whiskey, I remeber this, so tragic.

loved your poem

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2001).]

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2001-03-11 07:16 AM


Heartwrenching poem
But well worded
Liz

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