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Endless Love |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Etched upon my face Love repeating endlessly Mirrors of my soul Pictures out of time As we learn each others dreams Playmates, lovers, friends Wanting one more day To lose myself in your arms In an endless kiss Making memories To share when we are apart Warm the lonely nights So in the dark night And in the mornings dreaming I offer you love Endless endless love From this womans heart to yours For eternity |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Wanting one more day To lose myself in your arms In an endless kiss Making memories To share when we are apart Warm the lonely nights' Boy, do I know this, Paula! Wonderfully put! I love it! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This so beautiful Paula...such a yearning render straight from the heart! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula a host of Haiku's to deliver your perfect post. Well done. I loved this. the style and the message. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula dear heart, this is utterly truly wonderful. You make this look so easy and I know it's not, no not in the least is it easy. Truly a beauty to behold and to read it's a treasure. I love it Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula this is most beautiful...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, Wow. These haikus are amazing! It is hard to say so much with only a few syllables.. but you did an OUTSTANDING job. I applaud and applaud and applaud you some more  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My twin... You are always at the top of my list in reading!! How I love your work, and it's beauty.....and lately I detect a real note of happiness in your thoughts that you share, and that makes my heart glad for you!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sp...thanks Im glad you like it ethome...it is from the heart and Im glad you can feel that Kethry...its a style I am fast becoming addicted to...thank you Aaaawww sweet Marsha...they come much easier than you think dear one...the hard part is getting them done before they slip away...thanks James my dear friend...thank you so much I'm glad you can find beauty in my words rp25...thank you so much...I'm blushing Sunnyone...I am happy twin of my heart...thanks |
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