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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-09 06:32 PM

Mango Fire

against silken emerald sheets
with the fire roasted
eye setting behind
ice capped mountains
getting ready to sleep

auburn drapes surround
your hazel crystal vision
a taste of mocha latte
mixed with mango magic
lingers on your lips

while your breath explores
her deeper, searching for
the source of pleasure
she slowly glides along
a promising horizon
with soft and
swollen lips

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-01-09 10:39 PM

What a beautiful setting that you paint for my mind to behold. And I enjoyed the taste treats as well!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

2 posted 2001-01-10 11:00 AM

auburn drapes surround
your hazel crystal vision

Those words alone, are ''entrancing.''

Robert Joseph
~soft kisses~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-01-10 11:25 AM

Very nice, descriptive, sensual.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-01-10 03:05 PM

Not sure exactly whats going on but sounds interesting...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-10 03:07 PM

Wow...

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2001-01-12 01:40 AM

Sunny1, I'm glad you enjoyed the tastes and the visuals. thankyou ;-)

Robert, what can i say that i haven't said a thousand times.. *smile* ~wff~

VAS, thank you for the reply.

James..Thank YOU! this tells me it has you thinking, what more could a writer want ;-)

Sunshine, *VBS*

Thank you ;-)
Snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-01-13 05:23 AM

snow,
a cornucopia of sensual delights.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2001-01-13 05:50 AM

Kethry, thank you so much for that reply!

snow

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

9 posted 2001-01-13 06:00 AM

Another WOW from me..this is so sensual..I loved it...I had no problem at all picturing this in my mind...you did this so well....~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

10 posted 2001-01-13 12:19 PM

~LL~I really appreciate your comments, thank you!

snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

11 posted 2001-02-28 04:12 PM

you do subtle sensuality soooo good!
I'm going to find every single post you have here and keep replying until you believe what I'm saying.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

12 posted 2001-02-28 05:13 PM

You've painted lovely thoughts to mind...beautiful write.

Poeminister

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