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The Crimson Tears of a Poet's Heart
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The Crimson Tears of a Poet's Heart |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Words of love and life and loss… passion and romance, longing and sorrow… kisses and touches, feather light, softly sweet Penned thoughts and feelings emotions and sentiment desires and urgencies… passionate culminations of fervent extremes Scribed heartache and sleepless nights broken spirits and soul damaging loss… the ink that flows from the pen of a poet are the crimson tears within her heart. Annie Lehberg achildsheart 02-15-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! This is beautiful! Such a vivid image... I love it.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, yes, absolutely wonderful. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Kate Bennet New Member
since 2001-02-15
Posts 7State of Disarray |
Annie- Beautiful thoughts expressed so eloquently...nothing to critique here! Kate |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, my kind of images.. Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Thanks so much for the very kind words, I do appreciate each response. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ouch!!! this is so good i'm am just loving it ~*applauds*~ So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahhh yes, I relate very much Exquisitely expressed~Take care, Melissa~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed they are! Great work. "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice indeed! the poet truly does travel through all those areas of life with a heart to write about them....whatever the situation the poet spills the truth onto the page....and I like the reference to crimson tears....great way to look at it.....take care The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Whisper--Very beautifully expressed. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Whisper, How true this poem is. Well done  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Annie, you have shown much in this piece and mainly that you have the understanding of a poet for sure. Whether they be happy or sad tears, there is no stopping the pen sometimes from pouring it onto a page. Very wonderful work from you on this one. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Everyone, Thank you so so much for the great response to this piece. Only true poets within their hearts know this. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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