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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Forever Timeless  Words of a poet embellish these pages blue woven in tenderness they reflect for our view remembrances and fantasies of love known to us as true Words of a poet mellifluous in rhyme sprinkle beauteous imagery fueled with passion and desire though innocently inspiring not acclaiming any fame the words of a poet forever timeless shall remain... *~coco~* |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Coco, Lovely write. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
We all need this reminder, Coco, thank you, it's very lovely "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How true!!! *S* And you've certainly sprinkled some lovely imagery here. *S* Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words of a poet mellifluous in rhyme sprinkle beauteous imagery fueled with passion and desire though innocently inspiring not acclaiming any fame the words of a poet forever timeless shall remain... ==================== indeed Coco ... indeed .. lovely dedication to poetry and these pages.. well composed imagery and rhyme flow well done poetess sweet  When you see thru loves illusion, theres the danger your perfect lover looks like a perfect fool you go running off in search of a perfect stranger |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Poe, Kathleen, Suthern and JanetMarie->thank you PoetFriends for the sweet replies this one is written straight from my heart to all of you who share your poetry with me each nite... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Coco, I agree that we all need to be reminded of exactly what your poem expresses. I liked it.. alot  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Coco!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco, we too are honored to have you share your words with us. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautifully said dear Coco!!! Very nice SEA |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Timeless indeed are the words of a poet. Great poem. Deb |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'fueled with passion and desire though innocently inspiring not acclaiming any fame the words of a poet forever timeless shall remain...' Wonderful write, coco! I love it!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice these words of a poet...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just perfect sweet poet |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful and timeless words from you dear poet, take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree wholeheartedly well written!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And forever timeless, this beautiful verse shall remain ... just lovely Coco, wonderful sentiments to express a poet's heart! Best wishes, /Kit |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I wish to thank all of you once again for taking a moment to read this lil poem and for your most sweet replies... Hugs2UpoetFriends... ~coco~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I just love rolling around in sprinkles of poetic love of the pen and you have given me that with this wonderful piece of yours. Truely lovely words my friend. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mark, your reply warms my heart... Hugs2uPoetFriend... ~coco~ |
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