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Open Poetry #12

untitled quietude

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-17 01:45 AM

quiet
whispers almost glow
upon horizon

your name
a tiny echo, a pattern
in the night

takes flight
upon the clouds
over crowds

rests
upon my ears
wipes my tears

© February 17, 2001

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

1 posted 2001-02-17 03:54 AM

beautiful, I enjoyed reading!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-02-18 10:52 AM

Hi Vas,

I really enjoyed the simplicity of this piece, and its easy to emagine as well, very nicely done, thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-18 10:54 AM

Thanks so much Agust and Cerenity! So happy you read and enjoyed.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-02-18 11:38 PM

this tugged at my heartstrings...i esp liked "clouds over crowds"....very nice distinction, i thought

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-02-19 12:41 PM

shhhhhhhhhhh..........
I am listening to your calming.

Bob <><

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-02-19 09:31 AM

kaile: thank you
and lighthousebob: thank you

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