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Open Poetry #12

Winters End (Acrostic 17)

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-14 06:58 PM

Writing the moment overcome becomes me
I am encircled by mist emotive songs so
New a melody sings timeless in heart as I
Take one more step in silent words carressing
Each moment a summit dreamed ascend immortal breath
Resounding past valleys old my eyes only you above
See Heavens parting gates opening wide my amazed

Ever wider gaze transfixed desire steady knows
No distance seperates hearts pathways joined
Destiny invokes its right the gift of winters end

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-14-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-02-14 07:31 PM

What a beautiful acrostic.....I truely enjoyed this one alot. I have read many that were put together really well but lose the cadence in the middle somewhere but yours flows smooth all the way through and the words say much. Excellent writing.

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

2 posted 2001-02-14 08:20 PM

Pretty... but, uh... Winter never ends. *chuckles and winks*

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-03-16 02:36 PM

Your words are so fluid and hypnotic...this is a beauty.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-03-16 02:56 PM

AT, my friend---a bit of fluid, I will come back and read again.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-03-16 02:58 PM

ATelamon....MArvelous...

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