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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

0 posted 2001-01-13 01:23 AM

If You Only Knew
By Richard Maxfield
8-8-2000

If you only knew
What happens to me every time I am near you
There are things I cannot control
My palms become sweaty, blood pumps ever faster.
Bring me to full excitement in passion and desire.
Love pours from my heart.
My mind whisks me away to a place.
Our place, that only we know,
In this place is where we share love.
Only our love, love between a man and woman.
As God had intended love to be.
Love with no boundaries, free from social constraints.
No shame, holding nothing back.
Pure love and enjoyment as thought we were in the Garden of Eden.
For this is love, the love that burns in my bones.
It is for you and only you.
Every moment I live , every breath I take.
Thinking of you.
If you only knew.

Breathe~
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

1 posted 2001-01-13 01:27 AM

*nudge*

Tell her...this is beautiful, and she'll love it...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2001-01-13 01:57 AM

Beautiful...I can only ditto the above comment....she needs to know this~

You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

3 posted 2001-01-13 05:57 AM

Rich...how very, very lovely...You should let whoever this is know what you are feeling..Yes, just like the others said...tell her...You never know, she could be feeling the same way...

This is another one I shall keep safe... Hugs.. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

4 posted 2001-01-13 09:22 AM

Thank you all for the great comments. I did not write this poem with any one in mind as I dont even have a girl friend. I wrote for the lady I shall met one of theses days. I hope its soon.

Love and light,
Richard

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-01-13 09:37 AM

richard...heres to dreams love..!!

keep your romantic heart in tact..she will come..

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

6 posted 2001-01-13 10:47 AM

Thank you for your comment and best wishes.
Love and light,
Richard

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-01-13 11:53 AM

Agree with Breathe, Richard, and, hey, it's nice to put a face with your name and your 'love' poetry.
Virginia

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2001-01-13 12:13 PM

Richard love, she'll be there one day and then she will melt into you. love this one I really and truly do
Take care
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-01-13 12:38 PM

Nicely written

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-01-13 12:43 PM

You keep writing like this and it will be sooner than you think! {~,^}

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

11 posted 2001-01-14 03:19 PM

Thank you my friends for all the wonderful comments.
Love and light,
Richard

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