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Candid Moments Cameraed
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Candid Moments Cameraed |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Candid Moments Cameraed what do I miss what do I miss when I try to capture the bliss of your face by camera what did I miss in that flash? for I would just want to look on you and keep the full of you in view and never mind the camera's click when I can hold you to me quick… so to identify your face let me take you in my embrace let me trace the trace of you and then keep your identity as clue of what you mean to me let me see you in the impress of sheet let me feel you in this touch of neat then let me see you in shadows dim let me discard for you the shy and prim let us know the sweet of complete…. let me trace your lips and brow and keep you safe in the here and now and then with palms imprint my hand upon the deep of your command of what you mean to me for in a camera's briefest of click I know that a smile can disappear that quick the one that I would put there for you but not if I loose touch of you not if I loose much of you so be my candid moment be my can did moment be the camera of my soul be the picture I keep whole. 01.13.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is just supremely superb, utterly divine, and has the flow of melted honey. And yes I love it as always, because it's always unfailingly beautiful that's why dear heart. Never doubt that you are exceptionally talented. (And Puck always plays the jester to the fairy royalty you know.  )Take care love Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah......as a native chief once told me....."the camera captures a piece of one's soul, and holds it in place, throughout time"!! You have done this with your words, my friend, and very well done at that!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, there is no camera in existence that can capture what fingers can tracing one's face with love..this is such a beautiful thought for a poem and you have done it wonderfully... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AHH Sunshine...I'd rather see through your eyes than the camera lense anyday darling...this is beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, What the camera sees is view What the touch reveals is true. *L* Sy |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The camera freezes, the eye beholds...and your eye beholds what we all want to see... beautiful... jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha...I think you've given our doreen yet another line..."melted honey"...just think what she could do with that...thank you for reading!... Sunny1...that indeed was part of my thought of "imagery" in what the true Americans knew we could take, and what we could not take...thank you!... 'Deer...thank you for sharing that thought with all of us... Paula...be careful what you wish for...LOL...I seem to be saying that a lot lately...but I understand, and thank you!... Sy...only YOU could have said ALL of that in so few words...thank you... James, sweet comment, I do so appreciate it, thank you... |
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