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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2001-01-13 12:39 PM

LOVES' LAND OF MAKE-BELIEVE

The Willows whisper your name,
As dreams and thoughts of you capture me,
My eyes are closed, your words I hear,
For I can feel you near,

The breeze, the fragrance, the air,
Wraps its memories of you around me,
Upon my skin, I feel your soft touch,
Thinking of you, wanting you so much,

The doves, cooing their lovers tune,
Reminding me of your sweet voice singing to me,
Inside my heart, it feels your melody,
Your song, your words, paint a picture for me to see,

The peace, the stillness, serenity,
Feelings I Have when I am only with you,
Upon this night,every night,I come here to dream-weave,
Where you and I become one,in Loves'Land Of Make-believe!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-01-13 12:54 PM

beautiful...
and how nice to see your name and smile here.
lovely poem of romantic longing.
take care
jm

No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ...
and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2001-01-13 01:01 AM

Thanks Janet, nice to hear your words and to see you here too!

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2001-01-13 01:05 AM

WOW wondeful. What a love filled write. A very lucky man.
Love and light,
Richard

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2001-01-13 01:15 AM

Thank you Richard, Welcome to Passions! I have been away for awhile, but back now and happy to see new poets!!!

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

5 posted 2001-01-13 07:35 AM

How very lovely...Love all over the page with this one..You do this very well

..Hugs ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-01-13 08:41 AM

RH,

A big welcome back my friend! This was wonderful and I am happy to see your muse has returned to us.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2001-01-13 09:46 AM

~The breeze, the fragrance, the air,
Wraps its memories of you around me,
Upon my skin, I feel your soft touch,
Thinking of you, wanting you so much~
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Beautiful poetry, very romantic.
Deb

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-01-13 10:05 AM

How true and beautifully written !!

Land of make believe
Neath moon and stars above
Sharing dreams of togetherness
Where forever there is love
Hope

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2001-01-13 06:37 PM

ARH, wonderful poem, I just love this Loves Land of Make Believe.

Parker

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

10 posted 2001-01-13 07:20 PM

A fairytale masterpiece! And what would we do without that wonderful world of make-believe? Beautiful...
Elise

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-06-14 03:36 AM

Romantically fulfilling...James

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