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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-01-12 11:28 PM

Shiver...Slowly

Hey lover, c'mere...
Let me towel you off
Then crawl into the sheets
I've scented with musk talc

let me tangle myself
up in your willing limbs
I'll be the sky, you be the clouds
and rush through me

take me whole, all at once
devour and make me yours
paint your name across my soul

release the gates that held me back
trace your lips ... just barely touch
eyes, raining down emotion
only heard with our hearts

deeper, shiver, whisper, tremor
the earth slows and you take
me further

I'll be the sky ... you be the clouds
and rush through me
shiver ... slowly

1/12/01

this is a link from my site
with a voice recording.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-01-13 12:30 PM

Nice imagery....wonderful write!

Nathan

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2001-01-13 05:53 AM

thank you, Nathan ;-)

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

3 posted 2001-01-13 06:43 AM

I'll be the sky ... you be the clouds
       and rush through me
shiver ... slowly

WOW..I don't know what else to say..this was a wonderful read...Simply it made me say.. WOW..Hugs   ~LL~< !signature-->

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost.  author unknown

[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-13-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-13 06:56 AM

Snow, you did this very, very well....{~,^}

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2001-01-13 12:17 PM

~LL~ and Sunshine, thank you both very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

snow < !signature-->

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice."
from "Watercourse" by Snow

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 01-13-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-05 12:58 PM

OH BOY - WHERE IS MY IRISH SPRING!!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

7 posted 2001-02-06 05:19 PM

Neve,I love your words (and you) more each day.
A trancing shimmer of your heart's light.

Robert Joseph
~fc~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-02-06 05:22 PM

So good to see this one back on top!

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

9 posted 2001-02-06 05:26 PM

Wow!

Jon

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

10 posted 2001-02-07 11:13 PM

love this...! such emotion, such a wanting in your words...

very nice!

hugs, g

"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-02-07 11:40 PM

oh yea, likin' this very much! Very well done!

-SEA

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

12 posted 2001-02-14 03:21 PM

*VBS* i'm so glad you liked this one!!
thank you for those wonderful replies!

snow

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

13 posted 2001-02-28 04:02 PM

THIS is one my favorites!
you are incredible.

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