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Just Feeling My Way
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Just Feeling My Way |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
What I brought upon myself stares I cannot see and so what if I'm blind Valleys only dream for me The truth as I can see but so what if I lied You were gone too I don't know this and still so what I if I do I could've left And forgotten all about you You were here and would not stay While I will remain come on so what if I'm stupid |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So wonderful having you back...and with such a poem...loving beyond the leaving...doesnt make you stupid just human like the rest of us... |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
*Actually really surprised to be recognized* Thanks!!! And I didn't think anyone would even get a basic premise, and you got the whole deal...I'm so glad you wrote in! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Well we are most if us morons most of the time. You are certainly not alone in giving all to no end. And sightless is more common than a cold amongst we corporeals. well said AT [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WobblyHeadBob~ To feel is to see beyond the goodbye ... Wonderfully conveyed thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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