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Finishing the Race
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Finishing the Race |
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NerudaStar New Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 5California, USA |
As the beam connects to the sun so does my soul to yours inconstant daylight swear not by the moon nor constellations but vow by the azure blue of the sky or the salt in the ocean sure to stay and multiply on our tongues our hands two pilgrims sin purged the east bright with the morning a constant cycle our warmth finishing the race. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is lovely ... excellent imagery welcome to Passions .... nice to have you here ... I look forward to more of your work take care jm Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome aboard, NS.. This is a great entree to our forums. Passions is a wonderful place, and I'm sure you'll love it here... Check your email for a special greeting...  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
welcome and yep, agreeing with the above...this is very nicely done  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! This is a marvelous first post! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . like the poet that shares your name, you know love well. . . Welcome. . . and I look forward to more from you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Welcome to Passions. This is a lovely first post. Hope we will see more from you. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Very nice. Pilgrims indeed. Good luck, to the finish line. AT |
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NerudaStar New Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 5California, USA |
Thank you all for your lovely comments and welcomes. I feel at home already and am sure to share more of my work with you all |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love the imagery, love it all! Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
applause!!!!!...welcome to the blue pages.... an awesome write, here!! -all you can really expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry - (me) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful work... I look forward to reading more! Welcome to Passions! |
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