Open Poetry #12 |
Hidden Feelings (revised) |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~*hidden feelings*~ though our eyes have never met your eyes of brown...my eyes of blue a multitude of feelings stir within my heart there are so many things i want to say to you many things seperate us, more than just physical mountains tall and oceans wide-- though we desperately try not to convey how we feel there are just some things you can not hide i hear the smile in your voice when the two of us speak the sheer sound of your voice leaves me feeling completely weak-- i feel myself pull back telling myself this simply can not be the reasons are quite simple you don't belong to me i have no rights to you yet, i can't change how i feel i dont quite have a word for what this is but these feelings are pure and real we have both been hurt from our pasts hurt so deep, that it broke our hearts in two so...we build these walls now neither of us knows what to do someday i may find myself look deep within your eyes the mere thought of that leaves me with a contented sigh Amy M. Kennedy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I know not what to say except for, this is beautiful. hugs Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
though our eyes have never met your eyes of brown...my eyes of blue a multitude of feelings stir within my heart there are so many things i wish i could say to you =============== me thinks ya just said it all ... and ya did it sweetly, sincerely and poetically perfect. beautiful writing Amy-girl love ya jan We're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well I THOUGHT my thoughts were hidden... but you've described my feelings so well I must have hired a sky-writer! LOL Beautiful, Aimster... I like this very much! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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