Open Poetry #12 |
Flirtatious {Haiku} |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Slow wet spring weather fragile and fickle snowstorm warm kiss cold shoulder |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Enjoyed the poem and the photo. I don't understand the title, however. Help me. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh, a Haiku. Anyone who knows me will tell you this is my favourite format. I understood the title... I think. It was a personification of the snowstorm, "fickle and fragile," also "warm kiss, cold shoulder." Yeah, that snowstorm is such a tease. A very nice job on the haiku. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Delightful! |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
'Beautiful..' I love the graphic too! Smiles to you... Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Thanks to all for your time to comment. Yes Flirtatious was meant to mean that spring teases us with a hint of warmth and then gives us the cold shoulder. Just My Scottish sense of humor in my haiku LOL May Spring warm your soul and kiss you with sunshine~~~ Allen, I will search to see if you have posted haiku too.I love to do these and tanka and choka as well. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Hmmm your witty inventions. I have missed these. Were you on the Big Island in snow? I hope you didn't make a visit here and sneak past me somehow. Beautiful words,lovely lady. RJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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