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From Light To Dark
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From Light To Dark |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I search the dawn each morning I can close my eyes and still feel it as it warms my heart with hope as gradually as it rises until it's pouring in my windows sending colors sparkling and my eyes dance with life and laughter spills over a rush of love I am so thankful so very lucky And then night falls gradually dimming to shadows then darkness I ache It seeps into my soul finding all the empty places inside of me that swell with each shakey breath throbbing painfully and when I close my eyes I pray I won't drown in the darkness before I reach the dawn To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And then night falls gradually dimming to shadows then darkness I ache It seeps into my soul finding all the empty places inside of me that swell with each shakey breath throbbing painfully and when I close my eyes I pray I won't drown in the darkness before I reach the dawn =============== beautiful imagery laced with achingly beautiful melancholy well written and expressed dream keeper cool contrast between day and night, dark and light. well done Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's hard to not fear the night. . . but you must not let it control you. . . I've learned this recently. . .  excellent poem. . . I love the images that you use here. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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