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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-12 01:14 PM

Sea Horse

Propelling forward
a lone Sea Horse armored swims
playing in the Deep

Poeminister

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-12 01:47 PM

love it, great haiku.....wonderful done.

((hugs))
Charisma

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-01-12 02:33 PM

stretch and fold and stretch
racing, racing 'gainst the tide
seahorse, seahorse ride

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-01-12 02:54 PM

I enjoy watching seahorses, thanks for the view!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-01-13 03:31 AM

I love to watch seahorses...the are so tiny and move with such grace and beauty...thanks for the lovely image

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-01-13 03:33 AM

exactly what haiku should do.....
you painted a portrait in zen...

I YAM a fan yanno....

hugs, you.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-01-15 04:59 PM

Thankyou all for your comments...

Poeminister

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2001-01-15 05:10 PM

Lovely image
Perfect haiku, with that little break
"A lone seahorse---armored swims"
Liz

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-01-15 10:06 PM

Lovely

-SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-01-15 10:08 PM

Wonderfully penned, I love the last two lines - I could envision it clearly!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-01-16 02:06 AM

Thanks you. Glad you guys liked.

Poeminister

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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

11 posted 2001-01-16 03:01 AM

Poeminister~
This is a little gem, just so beautiful. The seahorse is my favourite sea animal along with the dolphin...thanks for sharing this beauty
~HUG~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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